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Friday, December 17, 2010
Revisions... oh, fudge!
I tweeted a couple of days ago that the only things on my mind are Christmas and my love-hate relationship with revisions. Still true today but they've now combined into one topic.
See, I also have a love-hate relationship with Christmas candy. Specifically fudge. I love the taste, the texture, the *taste*. I hate what it does to my waistline.
A romance manuscript is a lot like fudge. There are some basic ingredients you always need: butter, sugar, a dark moment, a HEA/HFN. But there are other things that are similar recipe to recipe or book to book, but not identical. Chocolate chips or unsweetened chocolate, corn syrup or marshmallow cream, a bad guy trying to kidnap the heroine or a dark family secret that will rip them apart.
And like a batch of fudge, a manuscript can be going along great and then *bam*, something happens and it just doesn't work.
With fudge, a redo pretty much means starting from scratch. Thankfully, with a manuscript there are REVISIONS (though there are times just starting over is tempting!).
I like revisions because I like making a book the best it can be. I like pushing and layering and okay, further torturing (my characters, not myself-- but see the above comment about starting from scratch! :)). But it takes an amazing amount of energy for me to revise. Because I pour it all out the first time. Or at least I try. Sometimes it feels like there's just nothing left. Like I tried to make fudge and it called for a whole bag of marshmallows but all I had was 3/4 of a bag and I already dumped those in. I'm completely out.
But, it won't be as good.
That 1/4 of a bag makes a difference.
So, it's worth digging deep into the "cupboard", coming up with more, putting the rest-- every last bit-- in.
And you know, sometimes just when you're sure it's perfect, it occurs to you to add something-- like toffee bits. And suddenly--wow! Even better than before. Toffee crunch fudge becomes everyone's new favorite!
Yeah, it can happen.
(Let's hope I can find some magic toffee bits for this book in the next 2 weeks! *g*)
And for your fudge-ilicious pleasure: FUDGE RECIPES (Come on... how can anyone not like site called Fudge Recipe. com?! Awesome! http://www.fudge-recipe.com/.
And there's Kahlua Cream Fudge--- are you *kidding* me??!!! Yee haw!!)
Erin
Mmmmmmmmmm. Fudge
ReplyDeleteIf my MIL hadn't just given me two batches of homemade fudge, I would love, love to try that Kahlua recipe. Will definitely save it though to make later.
ReplyDeleteThanks Erin and happy holidays.
Don't need no fudge. But I feel your revision pain. I too am reworking a MS and it's KILLING me. This is not edits which I actually kinda like. This is adding, subtracting, and rewriting. Okay maybe I do need fudge.
ReplyDeletehee, hee... the Kahlua fudge is looking better and better. Or maybe Kahlua minus the fudge!
ReplyDeleteI so needed to hear this right now. I'm starting revision hell on my NaNo project. Making fudge may take the edge off the pain.
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